HQ pajama costume story reviews

Madoka's story seemed all good to me! Just have some small comments for the others' stories:


Kyouko's story:
[line 49] ...The heck, what's with the all the hair talk.
--> remove "the" before "all"

[line 142] ...Sakura-san, I may wrong,
--> add "be" before "wrong"


Mami's story:
[line 18] It's been a while since we've had a pajama partyy, huh!
--> extra y at the end of party


Sayaka's story:
[line 111] (Don't tell me this a witch's barrier...?)
--> add "is" after "this"


Homura's story:
[line 42] (I want to make plans, but I don't get the time...)
--> maybe change "get" to "have" (or change the second half to "but I won't have time")