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- Hey there! :3
- Firstly, terrain. I think you have a few too many leaves in the ground. From what I can tell, you wanted to replicate like a jungle area, but it looks a bit too 'easy'. I would reduce some of the leaves in the ground, and use more of a palette, with clay etc.
- Secondly, organics. Your tree is really nice, but the leaves and branches need work. You need a lot more branches; large and small. You would also benefit from using a larger brush, with a high air percentage in the brush
- Eg: //br sphere 10%leaves,90%air 5
- Search Plutouthere on Youtube and watch his God Tree tutorials. I think they'd really help you out!
- Lastly, structure. The structures you have are really nice, but a couple more would be cool! Also, a little improvement to the detailing/depth on the walls.
- Use a frame: https://imgur.com/ONsoRxh
- A frame is when the outer blocks are one layer out from the wall. This creates basic depth - it'll also make it easier to detail. You could use wooden stairs and trapdoors etc for detail design.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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