Tayter_Kat

Queen_of_Peace

Aug 20th, 2015
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  1. Hello Queen_of_Peace, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have somewhat of a structure, but it has no depth. I recommend adding some depth by incorporating trap doors, buttons, slabs, stairs, and fences into the sides of your walls/structures. If you need a visual, please visit /warp depthtutorial.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like animals and trees. You have some trees but they look a lot like/are notch trees. Please build a custom tree. Custom trees are trees you build your self by using your own creativity and uniqueness. One note about building trees: try keeping it proportional as this makes it more realistic.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. Your terrain is very flat and uninteresting. I recommend adding interesting terrain all around your plot to make it more appealing and realistic. Make sure It is not boxy or flat as this is not appealing to the eye.
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  10. Fix the things mentioned above and your good to go! Good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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