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- Hello Timothy_Gamer!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. This review will be short because your plot is lacking some major things. Lets start with your structure.
- You structure is pretty decent and shows some effort to it. It shows some depth but lacks detail. The design you have implemented is too repetitive. Try to use stairs/slabs to detail your walls. refer to ./warp depthtutorial for extra help.
- You have absolutely no organics (trees, animals, flowers, etc) or terrain to your structure. If I was you, I would start all over to implement these vital parts.
- You plot needs a major revamp and a lot more effort put into it. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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