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Novice Review: MattieTDK

May 17th, 2015
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  1. Novice Review:
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  3. So its a good plot and i do think it could rank but theres a few things to work on before it does!
  4. The trees could use some work, smooth out the trunks and fluff the leaves out a bit more so that everything isnt so blocky! The buildings need a little more work just to put them over the edge. They seem a bit top-heavy so maybe try and balance that out with some attachments and moore layers to add depth!
  5. Great job so far though! Good luck!
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