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- Novice Review:
- So its a good plot and i do think it could rank but theres a few things to work on before it does!
- The trees could use some work, smooth out the trunks and fluff the leaves out a bit more so that everything isnt so blocky! The buildings need a little more work just to put them over the edge. They seem a bit top-heavy so maybe try and balance that out with some attachments and moore layers to add depth!
- Great job so far though! Good luck!
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