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- Hey there! :3
- So firstly, I really like your terrain. You have nice variation, and a good amount of layers. I also like the 'decoration' you've given it, with the use of grass and flowers. In some areas, however, it might be a nice idea to add some wheat patches, just to fill the space some more so it's not so empty in patches! This also adds atmosphere, which I think is very important!
- Secondly, organics. I really like your tree! I think it has a nice shape, and good decoration with the player heads. However, your leaves show an obvious sphere - try and hide this with percentages.
- The most common command for tree leaves is usually:
- //br sphere 90%air,10%leaves 5
- Try that, and follow the branches first, then meet in the middle!
- If you don't have branches, I'd highly recommend adding some.
- The smaller trees I would make the trunks a little longer, so the don't look so small and chunky.
- Lastly, structure. The one structure you have is pretty good, but I wouldn't use stairs to make the roof. I think for this style, you may want to opt for more of a medievally roof style, using full blocks instead of stairs. I'd suggest you bring the roof outwards, instead of upwards and in.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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