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- Aspirant Review:
- OOOOOOOOOOkaaaaaay bob.
- SO! Im going to go pretty in to detail on this and i really hope that this will push you over the top to aspirant but who knows!
- So the tree still needs work. Its quite rough so smooth it out so its more tree-like. The roots need some work too, i wont say what because i think you know, but still its good to mention it! To be quite honest also, i dont think the glass in the trees is doing much (if anything) for the tree itself. It makes it look a bit too busy if you know what i mean.
- The structures at this level should really be elevated, the ones on your plot (not dissing you or anything) are a little too basic for this rank. Add more layers to them and make them more complex with detailing and such. Really try and do them up so they really catch your eye when you see them. The hanging ones should have some sort of way to access them since right now theyre just kinda there and they look like theyre there for decoration, which they arent since theyre houses.
- The terrain as i said before, is decent though i do think there should still be patches or grass rather than just grass speckled all over.
- Best of luck for the next review!
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