Hey there! :3

I wanna say that I love the turtle, however the rest of the plot just feels a little messy, and not very well thought through. Your peaks are a bit too contrasted, and there is too much lava! Then the floating island and the house on top doesn't suit the style, whatsoever.

I think it'd benefit you to restart your plot. Your plot is just a little too random, I'm sorry.

Next time, try building something with some interesting terrain, and a plot that has a purpose! You can use the turtle of course, just make sure it makes sense on the plot this time!

Good luck!
- Dutty :3