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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far but theres one or two things you should work on before ranking
- The terrain is good, and so are the trees, but theres little to no structure on the plot. Try to make something of substance on the plot somewhere, whether it be a house or tower or castle or what have you. The dragon above the plot is cute, but def needs some work. Smooth is out more and make the head bigger to match the size of the body. Add some wings or arms and color is as well!
- Good luck!
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