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- Menace Crimson, is, in the simplest terms, a character that is an evil counterpart to one of my other characters, Raelias/Raylias. But make no mistake, they are only “blood related” in that it’s likely and/or possible that one or both could make the other shed blood. Most likely Menace making Rae shed blood.
- The term “evil counterpart” only implies being a counterpart, not a sibling. And Menace Crimson is, in fact, an only child. Rae and Menace are only related in being counterparts to one another
- Menace Crimson is also a hermaphrodite.
- In terms of size, Menace is larger on average than most ponies. Roughly Big Macintosh’s size, or close to it.
- Even growing up, Menace was physically fit and competent, and often praised by her parents for being skilled. However, all this praise eventually got to her head, causing her to get it into her head that she should be the best, resulting in her becoming extremely competitive, thinking that she should be the best pony. Despite her best efforts, throughout all her life in competitions, though, she almost never got a blue ribbon. Bronze & silver, no problem, but never past that. She got one blue ribbon twice.
- How, you ask? The first time, was during her early years, in a race, when she cheated, by hazarding the track in favor of herself over her opponents. She still holds onto the ribbon, thinking that she deserves it and earned it honestly, having never owned up to it.
- The second time, she beat-up, and stole her blue ribbon from the winner of the competition, whom she feel cheated, and didn’t deserve to win.
- Despite this, while Menace doesn’t cheat often, she’s far from above it, whether as fraud, unfair advantages in competition, or adultery.
- Her lack of blue ribbons, temper, and competitiveness made her the subject of mockery for the failures by other students. Being seen as an outcast for being a hermaphrodite only compounded things, resulting in Menace taking a liking to bullying. This made her simply be seen as a bully, an outcast, and a freak, not to mention somepony who couldn’t do things perfectly.
- Ultimately, out of hatred, this caused her to lose all her faith in EVERYONE else, going from happy as a child, disappointed as she started her years in school, unhappy later on, angry in her preteen years, becoming a bully in her teen years, and continuing that while becoming outright malicious throughout the rest of her school years. Other than herself, Menace trusts no one, and genuinely likes few.
- Menace sees other hermaphrodites as a sort of “kindred spirits” to her, as she herself was shunned for being one of them. This, despite that she has never actually met any other hermaphrodites, so she may not even like them.
- With her behaviour, it was no surprise that she was soon expelled from school. And shortly after, accepted into another for her physical abilities. This trend continued, her physical talent fueling her education, and her poor behaviour getting her kicked out of many schools, and eventually, even her parents couldn’t take it anymore, kicking her out of their house. Her high school education ended shortly after that, prematurely. As you can imagine, Menace Crimson never finished high school.
- Menace has developed a narcissism of sorts, considering herself to be above everyone else, seeing all others as horrible jerks, and herself as doing the world a favor by making the lives of others miserable, or sometimes just outright ending them.
- As a result of her pseudo-narcissism, Menace is vain, and takes pride in her appearance, mane, tail and coat and all, despite her nomadic-fugitive lifestyle, which leads to her being slightly malnourished and underslept. As such, she is often willing to go to great details to maintain her appearance, which some might describe as “beautiful”, “impish”, “demonic”, “stuck-up”, “intimidating”, or just plain “evil”. Menace herself would likely describe herself as “beautiful”.
- Still, excessive competition, and incredible physique, and regular practice has fueled an incredible physique on her. And now being a nomad of sorts, who causes trouble wherever she goes, is a felon wanted for multiple counts of assault, rape, murder, disturbing the peace, theft, break-and-entry, and other crimes, she is quite fit, adapt at fighting, infiltrating, and escaping, and is somewhat knowledgeable on tactics and magic.
- Overall, she is an experienced, adept, flyer, fighter and “sports player” of sorts, among other things.
- (Trivia: I designed Menace Crimson’s cutie mark to be an opposite to Rae’s.) Few have a good idea of what Menace’s cutie mark means, but many think they have a good idea, although, perhaps somewhat ironically, not Menace herself. It appeared sometime in her “teenaged” school years, and represents what kind of thought should be going through one’s head if Menace is near you; True to her name, she will often cause carnage, make many things unpleasant, and generally be unpleasant.
- Menace is somewhat hedonistic. She also has no or few compulsions against lying, injuring others, or just plain doing mean, horrible things.
- Menace enjoys the suffering of others, and to her, dangerous, or often lethal events often seem like “hilarious pranks” to her. Ex: A bucket of cement falling on someone’s head, a seesaw being used to catapult somepony into a vat full of nails, etc.
- Her stallionhood is rather large, and her marehood, well-developed, but they are among some of her less-used parts.
- Menace’s candyvag and cock taste of sugar-coated marachino cherries.
- Her favorite food is coconut.
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