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R*Novice Review: Bearito

Jul 4th, 2015
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  1. Novice review:
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  3. Cute plot so far, but theres some stuff to work on before ranking up :)
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  5. I like the levels of terrain, but i feel like they could be more exaggerated. Having the grassy overworld bit lifted up and having more levels added to it. And maybe the netherworld bit lowered a little more, and having more added to it to make it more atmospheric. Also, try to make the transition from each "world" a little smoother Perhaps even having more of a gradient will help x3
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  7. Your structure is good, but its a tad small for the size of the plot. Add more on to it, making it bigger and more grand. Your detailing on it is a bit slabby, so try to work that out by adding stairs, fences, walls or even buttons to balance the details. Your build has little to mo depth as well. So really try to add more layers to the build, to give it a sense of depth and deepness. Also, try to incorporate another block in to the palette, as right now its just the stonebricks and lapis.
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  9. Your organics are good, but try to add more around the plot. Have more variation to them as well! Make some bigger and some smaller, and scatter them around to break up the empty spaces.
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  11. Hope this helps!
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