Hey there!

So from first glance, I can see the only thing you listened to was to change your structure - other than that, your trees are still clay, and you haven't changed the details in your terrain. Please fix these issues before I further continue your plot review.

I will add that the structure you have here looks nice - slightly over detailed and the roof needs to be larger, but we'll come to that in more detail once you've changed the original things I asked of you.

Good luck!
- Dutty :3