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- Hey there! :3
- Personally, I'd just like to see some little details added to the plot.
- In the terrain, you could have some add some decoration so the area isn't just all snow/ice. You could have some frozen ponds, maybe some pathways on the built up areas. You could also add some dead trees, tree stumps, maybe some more little structures.
- I'd also prefer to see an actual penguin organic, instead of a penguin made from one block and banners. It's a very creative idea, I will admit, but organics wise, it doesn't show too much skill.
- I do, however, really like your trees and your structures! You have a nice amount of detailing, and the trees are nice and bushy (althought I'm not too sure they're the right kind of style of trees you'd find in a snowy area, but they fit so it's fine.) There is one tree that is lacking roots however; if you could fix that up, it'll be great!
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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