Girls in the Hood json Review

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(The w/e gets a little cutoff on the side; move the line break a bit earlier in the sentence and move w/e to the next line.)
Anon: yup@      i thought one day@      a prince would come save me from my tower or w/e@      totally gonna happen lol -->


(Not sure if you guys wanted the small words on the google doc to show, but they show up as these lines ingame.)
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Mitsune: ...——[email protected]'s okay...
Mitsune: ...———...——...

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Mitsune: ...——...
Mitsune: ...———...——...



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(The w/e gets a little cutoff on the side; move the line break a bit earlier in the sentence and move w/e to the next line.)
Anon: yup@      i thought one day@      a prince would come save me from my tower or w/e@      totally gonna happen lol

(line break suggestion)
Mitsune: ...Maybe...this is what it sounds like between@friends...?


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Search: suitoku temple power spot --> put a colon before "Search" too

[Category] Urban legends/rumors@Location: Kamihama City@Title: Anon Files
--> the [Category] doesn't show up in text (probably since it's in normal brackets, and the game uses those for effects)
--> also move "Title: Anon Files" to a separate line. It made the rest of the json misaligned.

There's an old candy store located at xxx of Sankyo Ward.@This place is actually well-known to police@and other public safety officials. --> move the line break to after Sankyo

hood (hu̇d)@   1. A head covering.@   2. Slang: A neighborhood. --> (refer to the 2nd suggestion of this json) This is showing up as Mitsune speaking it instead of being on the digital screen, and then the next line is an empty digital screen.


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Mitsune: ..I haven't been on a field trip since I was in@elementary school. --> add an extra period to the beginning