Tayter_Kat

Initiate Review

Jun 21st, 2015
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  1. hello stompzz, i'm Tayter_Kat and ill be reviewing you plot....
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  3. Building/Structures:
  4. The house you have looks great, but you need more buildings on the plot. it looks uninteresting with just one building. I try to think of it as my builds make a story. Everyone will wonder why their is one build when you could add a bridge, wishing well, stable ect. Add more buildings and you will be good to go.
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  6. Terrain/Organics:
  7. Well the hills are good, so that is a plus, but try adding more detail, like holes and maybe a cliff. Also, another path way wouldn't hurt along with grass/ flowers/ crops.
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  9. Add more structures and more terrain and you will be good to go!
  10. -Tayter_Kat
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