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- Characters (ofc from angel beats but whatever)
- yuri: intelligent/slightly scatterbrained also extremely insecure and depressed, kills herself at the end of act I which kicks off everything else.
- otonashi: p, slightly perverted, eventually gets together with kanade. "no way jose" (actually she dies) and then with yuri at like act 3? some point?
- shina: she fucking hates everything and thinks everyone is immature, eventually just leaves (but maybe not)
- iwasawa: if you think about it not much is revealed about her in the anime anyway but her with otonashi and yuri are the 3 main characters really
- kanade: basically just used as otonashi's first gf until she dies because she was killed by the enemy although explain her backstory and give her a bit of character also make her kinda optimistic unlike everyone else who will eventually become more cynical than me.
- lol we need hanada and some non-angel beats characters because i hate the word OC because original oc, do not steal amirite
- -plans: watch some serial experiments lain/nge/clannad at some point, do some lotaris shit then work on this sometimes?
- suffering: holy fucking shit wtf is our suffering level
- the enemy:
- - not planned because wtf im an idiot
- - kicks off in Act II Stg5 end/Stg6
- questions:
- - how do we make it unpredictable?
- - at this point only act1 and maybe the early parts of act2 are even close to finalized or being written
- ~~act I: the life, death, and times of Yuri Nakamura~~
- act 1 stage 1: birth
- - Yuri's birth
- - Early life (0-14/15, maybe a birthday chapter)
- act 1 stage 2: loss
- - massacre of family (yay fun)
- act 1 stage 3: depression and insanity
- - fights people
- - extreme aggressive insecure and depressed
- - spends hours curled up crying
- - parents begin to fight
- act 1 stage 4: murder
- - finds killers of siblings, steals gun, murders them
- - sits down realized she's killed 3/4 people, making her no better than them
- - part of her final descent
- act 1 stage 5: Descent
- - descends into extreme sadness/depression and early stage psychogenic death and becomes suicidal
- act 1 stage 6: end
- - yuri dies (suicide? psychogenic death?) and descends (?)
- ~~act II: rebirth~~
- maybe merge 4-5, 5-6
- act 2 stage 1: rebirth
- - goes to school, kanade is just a student this time around
- - add tachibana kanade because why the hell not
- act 2 stage 2: a new student joins!
- - otonashi kek
- act 2 stage 3: what are we?
- - yuri, otonashi basically question existence. yuri has a mental breakdown because extreme trauma.
- act 2 stage 4: life [temporary]
- - mess about, enjoy themselves
- - just have some normal school life
- act 2 stage 5: so, then, how are you? [temporary]
- - explain some damn backstories (otonashi = different, iwasawa = same)
- - add some more god damn characters
- act 2 stage 6: love blooms [temporary]
- - iwasawa x someone (lol i hate the word OC, ORIGINAL OC DO NOT STEAL)
- act 2 stage 7: loss and assault
- - fucking school shooting (probably not, but some deadly attack)
- - war is beginning
- act 2 stage 8: absolute failure [temporary]
- act 2 stage 9: A War Begins
- ~~act III: ascension [TEMPORARY TITLE] ~~
- act 3 stage 1: The Battlefront!
- act 3 stage 2: New Beginnings
- act 3 stage 3: Total Assault [temporary]
- - attack on the enemy
- act 3 stage 4: Ripped Away
- - someone dies
- (kanade probably)
- - MAYBE CHAPTER 5
- - PERSON GETS KIDNAPPED UNTIL EPISODE 12 BUT NOT YURI EVEN THOUGH I WANT HER TO IT WOULD SUCK ALOT AND WOULDNT MAKE HER A MAIN CHARACTER AND WOULD JUST MAKE HER SOME DUMBASS DAMSEL IN DISTRESS MAYBE
- - otonashi re-enacts episode 13 for us. "KANADE!" 5000 times
- act 3 stage 5: Struggle
- act 3 stage 6: Defiance and Betrayal
- - Shina? (someone does because why the hell not) betrays the Battlefront, tells them to go commit die basically "this is so stupid". MAYBE ACTUALLY CHAPTER 8 OR 9, CHAPTER 6 IS TOO EARLY TO HAVE SOMEONE BETRAY THEM ALTHOUGH ITS SHINA BUT IT MIGHT NOT BE MAYBE HAVE A SPY TOO
- act 3 stage 7: [unknown]
- act 3 stage 8: Forced Away? [unknown]
- act 3 stage 9: Desperation and Hope
- act 3 stage 10: Escape?
- act 3 stage 11: Kidnapped! [might be completely shit so might change]
- act 3 stage 12: Sacrifice
- someone (probably Iwasawa) sacrifices themselves for yuri
- act 3 stage 13: climax!
- NOT THE FINAL NAME KEK
- act 3 stage 14: what happens after the climax (true beats?)
- - y
- act 3 stage 15: Love/True Beats!
- yuri x otonashi lol
- act 3 stage 16: ascension? (might be a completely different ending with 17 stages instead of 16, unpredictability is cool)
- ~~act IV: epilogue~~
- act 4 stage 1: An Old Battle Ends...
- act 4 stage 2: ...And a New Life Begins! (?)
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