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Wonakilll's Initiate Review

Jun 14th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. I like the hill you have under the structure, but the rest of the plot is flat. Pull out some of the land and add more layers. Use this as inspiration:
  4. http://www.reverieinteractive.com/BetaGames/Minecraft_Clone/MCCloneTech1.PNG
  5. I like the palette, however! It's a nice contrast. But I would suggest keeping grass in the palette. The blocks you've used should be detail blocks and not main blocks, in the style your plot is built anyway. Using grass also allows you to add the grass decoration, as well as flowers/ferns/wheat etc.
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  7. Secondly, organics. I like the trees you have - they're small and fit with the plot. Looking good! Would be nice if the trunks were a little thinner though. And maybe if the leaves were a bit rounder. If you struggle, search Plutouthere on YouTube and watch some of his tree tutorials.
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  9. Lastly, structure. The structure you have is very small and lacks detail/depth. The use of cobblestone walls as the detailing is too much. They should be used in small amounts, because they have a very harsh texture. As well, the roof should overhang!
  10. Depth Frame:
  11. https://imgur.com/ONsoRxh
  12. Roof style idea:
  13. https://imgur.com/WgvhAUP
  14. After that, some more structure (if you keep it this small) on the plot would be lovely!
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  16. Good luck!
  17. - Dutty :3
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