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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far, but theres some stuff i think you should work om before ranking up!
- I like the terrain around the plot, but try to make a bit more of it. Make it bigger in some places to add more levels to the plot.
- Your structures are good, but try to detail them more with stairs, slabs, fences etc! Be careful with over-detailing though! Too much detail will make a plot look messy! Try to add more layers to your structures as well! This creates depth.
- I see that one of your houses is labeled "Blacksmith" also, so maybe try to make an add-on to that house and really play to the blacksmith theme! A bit fireplace for their work and lots of chimneys for air circulation!
- The organics on the plot are decent, but ill show you a trick to making trees by using a tool called World-Edit!
- Hold a stick and type this command in chat: //mask air
- Then type this one: //br sphere 20%leaves,80%air
- Then click away at your tree! The brush command is what i just showed you, and its very useful! If you dont want to use it, thats fine too!
- Good luck with your plot, and its looking good :)
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