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Mitsune MGS json review

Apr 26th, 2021 (edited)
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  2. Mitsune: But at the time, I was still worried...because...I wasn't special like Jun, a Magical Girl...
  3. --> add a line break after "because..."
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  5. Mitsune: If I don't want to be tormented by my precious memories, then...@All I need to do is tarnish my dreams of Magical [email protected] my own hands...
  6. --> add a line break after "tormented"
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  10. Hinano: If you pop it in your mouth, the endothermic reaction@will cool you down.
  11. --> move the line break to before "reaction" (and do the same to the flashback line for this later in this json)
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  15. Mitsune: That's..because...
  16. --> add another period after "That's"
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