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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far, but theres a few thinkgs you should work on before ranking x3
- Your terrain is very exclusive to the edges of your plot, so try to bring it in more and give the terrain more levels to it to make it more dynamic! The palette for the terrain is okay, but perhaps having some other block in the grass (like lime stained clay) could be beneficial!
- Your structures are okay, but they do need some work. At the moment, theyre over detailed with slabs and it makes the structures look messy. Try to loosen up on the over detailing and try to detail your structures more appropriately! Also, try to add more layers in the builds to give them more depth.
- The tree on the plot is okay, but it needs some depth as well! Add more layers to it and have it branch out farther to make it seem fluffier and more tree-like! Adding more trees around the plot is a good idea as well, to break up the empty spaces. Same goes for structures. You can def add more around the plot to break up the empty space.
- Something to also keep in mind is theme! Keep your plot consistent and that will keep your plot clean!
- Hope this helps!
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