Tayter_Kat

DiamondMC101

Jun 30th, 2015
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  1. Hello DiamondMc101, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from towers to houses to bridges. Your structures are all lacking depth. Depth is the layers within a structure. you can add depth to any build by incorporating slabs, buttons, stairs, fences, and trap doors. This will make any building more appealing and more character.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like animals and trees. Your tree is good, but I suggest adding more leaves to fill in some bare spots. Also, try adding more around your plot to make it match.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. Some of your plot has terrain, but majority is very flat. Try adding more hills and craters to the spots that do not change any levels to make it more realistic. You can also add more blocks to the ground, instead of it being all grass. This might make it look more like it was torn up( since it looks like a construction site).
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  10. Good Luck<3!
  11. Tayter_Kat | Jr Mod
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