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- Comment: The Topic sentence describes the transport short and on point with the supporting sentences providing good examples of the capabilities of the van, with the conclusion providing a notable example on how the van is being shown in popular media. Grammatically and stylistically I donβt see any mistakes. I do wonder though, is only one van type used for all the examples? Overall, the paragraph defines the term very well.
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