Person452

Hello there Person452, this is your initiate review...

Structure:
   This is anything from houses to towers to market stalls. You have a structure, but it is lacking depth. Depth is the layers within a structure/build. You can add depth by incorporating slabs, buttons, trap doors, stairs, and fences into your build. If you need a visual example, try visiting /warp depthtutorial.
Terrain:
   This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. You have some terrain, but other parts are flat (for example, the lake area). I recommend adding more interesting terrain before re-submitting. Be creative when adding terrain, but don't make it look unrealistic either. Keep it smooth instead of bulky. Also, make the cliffs in the corner of your plot more realistic instead of looking like a stair case.
Organics:
   This is anything living, like trees and animals. You have some great trees, and they look great! magnificent job here!!!

Fix the things mentioned above and you are good to go! Good Luck<3
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