Tayter_Kat

DraemGames

Jun 29th, 2015
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  1. Hello DraemGames, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to market stalls. You plot has a few houses, but that are sadly lacking depth. Depth is the layers within a building or wall that give it a sense of realism. You can add depth to a build by placing slabs, trap doors, stairs, buttons, and fenced into or on a build/structure.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like trees. You have little to none on your plot. You also need hand mad trees on your plot to rank up
  7. to Novice. Hand made trees, also known as custom trees, are necessary for all the ranks, so be prepared. When you build the trees, make sure the leaves and trunk are proportional to each other. The trunk should not be a twig with leaves or to huge to even be recognized as a tree. The leaves should also flower very well, and not look boxy.
  8. Terrain:
  9. This is anything involving the ground, like hill, caves, ravines, cliffs, etc. Your terrain is very flat, so try adding hills and craters or any other ideas you have to make the terrain less flat and more realistic.
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  11. Good Luck<3
  12. Tayter_Kat | Jr Mod
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