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zTT's Initiate Review

Jun 17th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. You have a little bit in one corner of the plot, however it's all fairly symmetrical. Try and make it a little more random, not going up one each time (if that makes sense)
  4. Then I'd say add at least one more layer in the other corner which has been left completely flat :3
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  6. Secondly, organics. Your trees have the same problem as the terrain - they're not randomly placed enough! I also would highly recommend not building the leaves out of clay - instead, use actual leaves, possibly with some other blocks thrown in there to add detailing.
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  8. I love your boats, however! They're beautiful! :D
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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