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- Hey there! :3
- Firstly, terrain. You have a little bit in one corner of the plot, however it's all fairly symmetrical. Try and make it a little more random, not going up one each time (if that makes sense)
- Then I'd say add at least one more layer in the other corner which has been left completely flat :3
- Secondly, organics. Your trees have the same problem as the terrain - they're not randomly placed enough! I also would highly recommend not building the leaves out of clay - instead, use actual leaves, possibly with some other blocks thrown in there to add detailing.
- I love your boats, however! They're beautiful! :D
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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