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- Novice Review:
- Cute plot but theres some stuff i think you could work on before ranking up!
- Add some more dimension to your structure by adding some walls or maybe some sort of second level roof. Also by adding more smaller structures, you could get rid of some of the empty space on the plot.
- The terrain is decent, but theres only one cliffside to build off of besides the basic plot terrain, so try and add more levels to the terrain and break up the empty space i was just talking about.
- The trees are decent, but a little disproportionate. That mean that the trunk and the leaves dont match up. Smooth out the bigger tree's trunk and add more leafage to it, as for the little one, i would buff up the trunk a tad. Also by adding more trees around the plot, its creates a better atmosphere :)
- Good luck!
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