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Surrogate Mother END

Mar 7th, 2019
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  1. app tl. not that accurate(deep talk ..slang..). tnx to markues for the picture show.
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  6. ch title: a surviving child.
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  8. recap of:mc comes and strangles fmc from behind and wife calls out to mc. fmc asks mc 'why her' and mc starts cussing and calls her 'a crazy bitch' and asks her 'who does she think she is/where does she think she's at' and more cussing. mc then scolds himself cause he got all crazy and blames her for him acting all crazy over her(or mc blames fmc for the mess they are now in?). mc then details what fmc did: stabbed him, set fire to his home and tried to kill his pregnant wife. fmc then asks mc for one thing and that is: if he loved her.
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  10. ch start with mc strangling fmc and says 'love?! now, in this situation, you still talk about love?'. fmc chocking and mc says 'did i love you? no i did not! it was just a crazy moment caused by lust!!' and says how, he said that cause of the heat of the moment(notsure for this) and fmc gets triggered. fmc then caresses his face and says 'i ..i loved you..'.
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  12. then a fb starts, where mc replies to fmc about what he likes about her and kinda says how, the sex they had, wasn't mechanical and he didn't want it to be like that(as opposite to wife). some narration from fmc, that goes "I've lived my whole life giving up and running. The boss/mc was the best man in my life.". mc then confesses that he likes fmc and tells her how he wants her to stay there with him for a long time. then, how it's good that fmc was there and he feels free when he's together with her.
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  14. fb still.. and fmc replies to mc's sweet words with "The boss's doing this to me right now is just a moment's curiosity, and after that, nothing's going to happen." to which mc denies fmc's pov and tells her that he's serious about her. fmc narrates how, that love that mc push on her made her very happy. then is mc telling fmc not to worry, that he will protect her no matter what and to trust in him.
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  16. fb continues.. and fmc replies that she's thankful towards his efforts/devotion and how that makes her feel very secure(or make her feel overwhelmed with his devotion for her). next is fmc, telling mc she loves him and mc says the same. then it's narration, that fmc was confident in mc and knew that he loved her too, even if he said no?
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  18. fb over and fmc tells him that she's happy, that she could die in his arms. mc lets go and fmc calls out to him. wife then stabs fmc in the heart and mc calls out to wife. wife then tells fmc that she must die here. pool of blood and mc freaks out over fmc, trying to stop the bleeding.
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  20. fmc slowly dying and then, it's narration, where fmc remembers her mom's words, where she was told no to crave for more than she could have and fmc tells mom sorr, for not listening to her, but even so, she doesn't regret it(and she looks at mc). mc crying and frantically telling fmc to stay awake. next it's fmc, crying and closing her eyes and thanking mc for worrying/coming for her. fmc dead and mc calling her name 'kim ha-eun' over and over with loud desperate cries.
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  22. timeskip and wife at a prison with a baby. some praises for the cute baby from wife's oppa/kid's uncle, that says that he wants to hold him, but he cannot and wife asks him how he's doing. oppa says how he's doing okay and talks some more to the baby. then, oppa's narration how, that child was born safely even though that bullshit happened and how mc took everything that happened upon himself. oppa then asks if mc is still on trial and wife says 'yeah' and how, mc did invoke self defense, but a person died ..
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  24. mc pictured here in a detention cell and wife says how, mother in law tries hard to help there. oppa pities her for raising a child alone and while wife agrees with that and kinda, also pities them(mc x oppa). oppa then narrate how, if the baby came before they had the surrogate brought in, everything would have been perfect.
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  26. uncle then teases the baby, cause he's cute and looks just like his father and wife gets triggered and asks if that's true and does the kid resembles his father and oppa says 'yeah, they look alike'. then, narration from oppa, how he thinks that even though wife got the baby she always wanted, it fells like she didn't have anything.
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  28. a crazy wife them palms the window and tells oppa that 'No. This child looks like me! He has to look like me!!' and uncle conforms and says how the baby looks like his cute sister too. then, an angry wife says: this child is my child! it's not anyone else's child, but my child!!. next is oppa, that kinda asks wife about: what is she talking about so aggressively? and says 'don't tell me ..you?'(implying to smth ..buy a baby? on wife). then, narration, where uncle thinks how, wife should not act so weak minded, saying that she is the mother of the child whenever smbdy says anything to her. with wife insisting on it, how that's the truth until proven otherwise.
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  30. next is surrogate lady/madam choi and she asks suit guy/sg, about what time some engagement party is for some guy and sg tells her..6 o'clock at toptoon hotel. then she calls smbdy to ask, where she is, cause there's a lot of stuff to take care of. girl on the phone replies all cocky, saying how: it's hard to find smbdy that does things so fast like she does. choi then tells her how she must come to work this week or she's fired and 'she', who turns out to be B(fmc's coworker), agrees to that.
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  32. then it's B, that tells herself to calm down/finish smth she wanted to do(smth like that) and kinda says how: you fuckin' bitch(fmc) and wonders how could she go away like that(die). then she makes a case how, she lived with fmc for a long time and fmc was the only one she could call a friend and then she tells fmc to have a look, since it's the scenery that fmc always wanted to see. the end.
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  35. next is author's thanks for the readers.
  36. me: yeah ... some twist huh ...unless my app tl was a really shitty, this is some 'interesting' way to end the toon. can't really say that it's like that, but it's how the app in my pov was made it to be. so yeah, wife either bought that baby(madam choi helped her. so prbly no cuck baby) or she got seriously crazy there. RIP fmc ..author played it well there with the drama ..felt those feels. that it folks..bye.
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