xDraghun

pzagswag Plot Review

Jul 30th, 2015
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  1. Hello pzagswag!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure.
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  5. You structure is lacking detail, depth, and color. Try adding stairs/slabs for detailing and it will also add some more color tour structure. Pushing in the walls will add depth. Refer to ./warp depthtutorial for help. If u can access, ask a higher rank or staff to tp u there. Your bridge is a little tall so try to make it shorter and add more detail to it.
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  7. Your tree is bonemealed which is shamed upon. Remove it and make a custom tree. I also suggest adding more than one based on the extra space on your plot. Dont forget to add the branches and roots.
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  9. Your terrain is pretty flat and lifeless. Try to add other blocks for extra color and variation such as green clay, cobblestone, gravel, etc. I like how you made the bottom of the river sand, but try to smooth it a bit more cuz it looks rough and rigged. I like the sugar cane around the river which adds detail but try to add more sugar cane and maybe even more flowers. I suggets adding hills/mountains as well which will greatly increase your chances of ranking.
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  11. I think you need a lot more effort and work put into your plot before I can rank you up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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