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bfkul's Novice Review

Jul 3rd, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. I really like your terrain a lot, it's super cute. Makes me think of like a candy land type of area haha! You have a nice variation of layers and lovely looking cliffs! Nothing bad to say about them :3
  4. My only issue is that you have a lot of free space. Try and fill these areas! I can see you have started, with some hay bales, chests etc. Try and think of something that would go more with your theme; hay bales/chests are more along the medieval side of things. I'm not sure what you could have in those areas apart from those, but it could just be something simple like using quarts and creating a pattern on the ground, like you would with leaves on grass!
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  6. Secondly, organics. You have lovely trees for the most part! But a couple of them are a little too chunky for the leaves you've given them. Make the leaves a bit 'fluffier', by bringing them together instead of only following the branches. As well, give your trees some roots. It's all a bit squashed at the bottom of the trunks (apart from the one on the cliff), bring out the bottom roots just a little more!
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  8. Lastly, structure. I can't really fault your structures, they look really great and fit with the plot well! I think you could be a little more creative with the placement of the redstone blocks, if I were to comment on one thing. Having them in random places in the roof just looks a little strange, and your eyes go directly to that, taking away from the really lovely detailing on the rest of the houses!
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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