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- Hello DoctorWhoPVP428!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Let's start off with your structure.
- Your struture is really lacking depth and detailing. Your build has some color to it but it doesnt really look appealing when putting down different wood blocks in a stripe pattern. Try making a house frame first then inputting all the walls and such. ./warp depthtutorial for more help with walls.
- Your trees are bonemealed which are frowned upon. Remove them and start over with custom trees. Dont forget to add the roots and the branches.
- Your terrain is pretty flat as is with the default grass. Add some block variation such as green clay, cobblestone, gravel, etc to add detail and color. Make the buttom of your pond out of sand and add some sugar cane and flowers around it for extra detail and realism. Also, hills/mountains would really boost up your chances of ranking.
- Your plot needs some work before I can rank you up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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