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- Novice Review:
- Hey there! Nice plot but theres some stuff you should work on before a rank!
- First off, really cool idea with the theme, and i like that its original! :D
- The terrain is fine so i dont think you have to worry about that, although some craters would be cool, as its space themed :3
- The structures (while practical) dont have much detailing or depth to them. To add depth, you add layers to what ever youre working on to give it less of a flat feeling. Detailing would be with slabs, stairs, fences etc :)
- Theres no organics on the plot, so maybe try to add a few weird or dead trees, or maybe an alien organic would be cool :D
- Good luck!
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