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  1. THE GRAPHIC GAMES : ROUND 1
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  6. DESIGNER : paperinks
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  8. COVER : https://68.media.tumblr.com/c2b23d2f04906dc8889a5b46618e0c19/tumblr_ot2st28Rbj1vpli1co1_r1_540.jpg
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  15. ( CRITIQUE FROM JUDGE 1 ) @tropicolds :
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  18. • Things I like:
  19. Colour palette, brushes, placements. Everything looks good and the mood suits the story genre.
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  22. • Things I dislike:
  23. Text, Models' hue.
  24. The author's name and the subtitle have the same size, which may be confusing for the reader.
  25. The models have a yellow hue, it makes them look pale in comparison to the rest of the cover.
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  28. • For improvement:
  29. Move the author's name at the top of the cover, all words on a single line.
  30. Using color balance, give the models an orange-y tone instead of yellow.
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  33. • Score: 9/10
  34. Reason: -0.5 text, -0.5 hue
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  43. ( CRITIQUE FROM JUDGE 2 ) @impassively :
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  46. • Things I like:
  47. I like the idea you went for and the colors used!
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  50. • Things I dislike:
  51. The title is very low quality (blurred out?) and the couple looks kind of out of place.
  52. The author is also placed in an awkward place. I can see some awkward things around the cover,
  53. like in the R there's a half erased moon of a flower or something.
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  56. • For improvement:
  57. I think you should move your watermark up, put the author where it was, and move the subtitle to where the author was.
  58. I also think blending in the couple (referring to colors) would make it look more put together.
  59. Maybe erase the parts where you forgot- like on the bottom right there's a half pink moon, and in the R.
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  62. • Score: 7/10
  63. Reason: deduction for text and blending
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