Harmony 02 PR - meterion

Harmony 02 TL Script by Nitori -- PR by meterion FINAL

[037]
You're in my office because...
[PR: I would add a question mark after the ellipses.

[038]
It's Bordeaux, you see.
It's Bordeaux, you know.

Once one of the most expensive wines.
It was once one of the most expensive wines.

It has plenty of Merlot grapes, tastes smooth, and depending on the year, it may even be from a cask with 100% pure Merlot.
Plenty of Merlot grapes, a smooth taste, and depending on the year, it may even be from a cask with 100% pure Merlot.


[039]
How unexpected.
What a surprise,

You know your stuff.
you really know your stuff.

I'm from the last generation of those who could formally intake alcohol.
Mine was the last generation that could formally drink alcohol.

So, I wonder
[PR: Add comma or ellipses at end]

how infamous you realize this is?
do you realize how shameless this is?

The truce supervision council in Niger is caught in an extremely sensitive situation.
[..] Niger is now caught [..]

It's being decided which party to confer "justice" to,
The party that will be given "justice",

whether it be Niger's central government or the Touareg Tribe, based on our reports.
[..] Touareg Tribe, will be based on our reports.

[040]
but the Touareg are requesting a means to moderate that.
but the Touareg want a means to control that.

That's probably so.
Well, I guess that's true.

Now I wonder what particular standpoint that comment comes from?
I wonder, from what perspective does that comment come from?

the truce supervision council, which should be fair, was being biased towards interested parties, holding illegal transactions,
the truce supervision council, a supposed neutral party, was acting biased towards certain parties: making illegal transactions...

and unjustly manipulating Medicare.
and immorally manipulating Medicare.

was consuming alcohol, tabacco, and other harmful substances from the previous era...
was consuming alcohol, tobacco, [..]

[041]
That isn't funny or anything.
Don't go thinking that's funny.

The elements of WatchMe in your body which perform diagnosis have been completely normal.
[..] which perform diagnostics have been [..]

You've been sending dummies, haven't you?
You've been sending fakes, [..]

these dirty tricks of yours as a response to your Vigorment.
these dirty tricks of yours to your Vigorment.


[042]
but because of all that,
but now,

due to this mess of yours, I now wonder what will become of our truce supervision within this area.
because of this mess of yours, I wonder what will become of our truce supervision in this area.

There's no way you'd do something to taint this emblem of ours.
[..] to stain this emblem of ours.

[043]
Until the last of your enthusiasm calms, you are ordered to return to your home country.
Until you can calm yourself down, [..]

In 48 hours, the report from our regional office
In 48 hours, a report [..]

will state that the usage of the battlefield as a smoking area will no longer be permitted.
will state that smoking on the battlefield [..]

[044]
Subsequently, there is no longer a need to publicize the cause for your transfer.
So there will be no need to publicize the cause of your transfer.

and recall the communal etiquette.
and recall our communal etiquette.

You can't be joking!
You can't be serious!?
PR: the original phrase would imply that the director wasn't serious with that order.

...You can't be joking...
...You can't be serious...

[045]
I guess this is truly farewell for the time being, then.
I guess this is farewell for now.

To Japan...
Japan...
PR: She's not saying farewell to Japan, this line is connected to the next page.

[046]
that this adolescent me loathes.
and that [..]

[048]
despite being in the classrooms of this era, maintained her glorious isolation.
[..] maintained a sublime isolation.

[049]
Children who haven't had WatchMe injected into their bodies yet assemble at school and prepare for adulthood.
Children who have not yet had WatchMe injected into their bodies assemble at school and prepare for adulthood.

[050]
The treasured children after The Maelstrom.
Us treasured children, born after The Maelstrom.

All of us possess communal bodies,
We all possess communal bodies,

Everyone rejoices for the happy times,
Everybody rejoices in happy times,
PR: Reason for the switch to "everybody" is to keep the emphasis on their physical bodies, looks to be a recurring theme.

and everyone works to resolve the painful times.
and everybody works to get past painful times.

[051]
I have no interest in ordinary human beings.
PR: lol haruhi much?

[052]
even the softhearted people who greeted her saying that being alone wasn't a good thing,
PR: would change the end to ellipses

as you would expect, there was nobody who wanted to get further involved with her.
as you would expect, eventually nobody wanted to reach out to her.

I don't think we were considered "ordinary human beings" but as an alien or a kind of psychic, right?
she doesn't think of us as "ordinary humans", but some kind of alien or psychic, right?

A boy...
A boy, huh...

[053]
It seems she too met with Miach in the same fashion as I.
She too met with Miach in the same manner as I.

An ordinary after-school.
An ordinary day after school.

Have you seen any improvement in the tendency of your autonomic nervous system's balance being poor?
[..] in your autonomic nervous system's poor balance?

If you would like to try and deal with the underlying cause,
If you would like to try and correct the underlying cause,

[054]
I was simply thinking, "Well, there she is."
[..] "Hm, there she is."

[055]
It was sudden, so I didn't realize immediately that she had called out for me.
It was so abrupt, I didn't immediately realize that [..]