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TylerGuy55's Novice Review

Jun 19th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. I really like the variation of layers, and the cliff is super cool too! I would, however, recommend keeping a high percentage of grass in your terrain palette. I think coloured clay should be used as a detailing block and not a main block. The reason for this is because it can give a cartoonish appearance to the plot, and also restricts you from adding decoration to the terrain, like wheat/grass/tall grass/ferns etc, which are pretty vital for a plot - it adds to the atmosphere. The addition of these things would be great! You could also include some pathways from building to building, to give that extra ounce of atmosphere!
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  5. Secondly, organics. I really like your trees a lot! I honestly can't fault them. All I'd say is it would be nice if you had a couple more on the plot; maybe some larger/smaller etc.
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  7. Lastly, structure. I really like the building as a whole - it's like a proper, authentic medieval style house! I think it has a lovely shape to it, and some nice detailing, but I would like to see just a little more detailing on the bottom layer of the house. As well, it would be really nice to see interior! Or block off the inside of the windows with coal blocks/black wool etc, just so you can't see inside the empty house (But I would much prefer to see interior!)
  8. I think you are going to need some more structure on this plot. The staircase and bridge are a really nice addition to the plot, but there are some bare areas. A tower, to fit with the medeival theme, could be really cool in one of the corners!
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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