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- Hello FrasierHD, I'm tayter_Kat and ill be reviewing you initiate plot...
- Building/Structure:
- Well, to start off, the structure along the mountain is very good! but the mountain along side of it lacking variation in blocks, you can add more than just two different typed of stone. the bridge and water tower, or so I think that is what it is, is lacking a bit. try making them apart of the build make them have similarities to the main build.
- Terrain/Organice:
- This part is also lacking a bit. try adding different flowers and crops and any other organics you can think of to match your chosen theme. THe hand-made trees are a bonus though. also, the ground is looking a it flat, try adding more hills and holes to make it less flat and look more realistic.
- Good Luck!
- -Tayter_Kat
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