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rawski's Initiate Review

Jul 7th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. There's no terrain on this plot; not even bonemeal :c We like to see terrain on a plot, but as you've built the structure first, it's hard to add terrain. What I would suggest is adding small hills around the house, at least 3 layers, to add the definition. You could also squeeze a water area somewhere, maybe.
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  5. Secondly, organics. You, again, have none of those. The most common kind of organic people include on their plots are trees. Just make sure they're custom and not bonemealed!
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  7. Lastly, your structure. It has a nice looking design, and a good palette. You've included a small amount of depth, however the walls could still have a little more detailing (like the wall areas between the windows)
  8. I would also suggest a little more interesting interior, as we can see into the house through the windows. At least add a second layer to it, maybe, and then it won't appear like the walls inside just suddenly stop.
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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