assignment improvements

The sentence formation, punctuation, spellings and grammar needs some improvement.
RE DO Referencing. Number them properly. Use the correct Harvard referencing format.

P2 Referred! - You have explained how the personal information can be protected in IT systems of organisations. To achieve this criteria you have to explain how the principles of information security can be used to protect the IT systems of organisations.

M1 Referred - You have written various risks to IT systems and how to reduce those risks. You have to assess the impact that IT security threats can have on organisations’ IT systems and business considering consider principles of information security and legal requirements.