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DuttYGilberT

StainedClay_'s Novice Review

Jul 2nd, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, I wanna say everything looks super lovely! My only issue is I think you need to tone down some of the decoration you have on the plot - namely the hay and rose bushes; there's just a few too many. But it's a lovely looking plot and I'm happy you know what you're doing in terms of decoration!
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  5. Secondly, your tree - I love the shape the trunk has, but the leaves need some fixing.
  6. Use a brush for your leaves with a high percentage of air included. This gives a more natural look to the tree, and also shows the branches, which makes it more realistic. I also recommend this on the smaller trees too.
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  8. Good luck!
  9. - Dutty :3
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