Nineage - Today at 2:03 PM
moxie should be in the first sentence
because thats what makes it a good scarfer
so especially when combined with its typing...
and then add
and its moxie ability, etc etc
then u gotta change the next sentence too
still mention it hits hard after a Moxie attack boost there though
rest is good, id consider combining the two paragraphs in the overview
since neither is very long
but thats up to you
next section:
onix and mareanie dont resist eq
i think you meant are weak to it
i dont like your reasoning for fire fang
the goal isn't to hit grass types specifically
id say Fire Fang hits specific Pokemon, such as Ferroseed and Cottonee, that resist Sandile's STAB coverage
or something
i dont like saying Stone Edge does massive damage
it doesnt really hit THAT hard
just say decent damage or something
actually id also slash edge after fire fang
edgequake coverage is really good
and i see eq/crunch/se/pursuit
as a decent set
The remaining EVs are used to boost Defense one point and help mitigate Sandile's admittedly nonexistent bulk
can u explain this sentence
to me
lalden - Today at 2:10 PM
Blame Hilo
Idk
Nineage - Today at 2:10 PM
id say
lalden - Today at 2:10 PM
There's really nothing notable that those EVs help it survive, but no point in wasting them
Nineage - Today at 2:10 PM
they are put into defense to help it better take physical priority hits
but it still takes huge damage due to its bad bulk
or something
chou isnt a 16 speed scarfer
in the set details section
lalden - Today at 2:16 PM
Fixed
Nineage - Today at 2:17 PM
mention in usage tips
that using it as a revenge killer could be hard due to lack of initial power
sorry got distracted for a sec
mention not getting locked into fire fang unless you are using it to lure ferroseed or something
cuz its piss weak
team options are fine
other options are fine
in checks and counters
i wouldnt say most fighting types carry priority
just say some
your grass type examples are not good
use snivy and pumpkaboo-xl
burns shouldnt be in cc
cuz nothing that can burn it wants to stay in against it
ok lmk when u are done
and ill look it back over
oh i noticed
in overview
lalden - Today at 2:26 PM
You think I should mention burns somewhere else?
Nineage - Today at 2:26 PM
you shouldnt mention thunder fang
no dont mention burns
just remove that thing
just say it has access to fire fang
which works well with its stab coverage offensively