117 Corrections for the Amazon Kindle version of Perseus by

117 Corrections for the Amazon Kindle version of Perseus by Scott Rhymer.
http://www.amazon.com/Perseus-ebook/dp/B005FIT8JG

the ocean. The discharge illuminated the angry green sea for stadia1
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and the muscles of 1 Nine stadia are roughly a mile.
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fishing craft bobbing nearby on the serene waters, Okeia – “Swift”
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not sail. She was painted shining white, with cobalt blue gunwales
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asking about home, again,” she added. “I am keep telling him
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While he laughed, but the mirth did not reach his eyes.
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to his feet. Suddenly, the elder seemed taller, fuller in statue,
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young do not think; they react, they emote. They allow their
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this attempt to thwart the will of Fate failed, my friends,
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pressed on, “My mother’s cell – and while it was
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was a comfortable a cell as it could be made it
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been behind the pregnancy, Acricius could find no other explanation that
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-- yes, far-fetched one -- Danae had presented him with. Impregnated
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the child on a hillside and be done with the girl!
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of the Gorgon. They are appropriately named: Deino, Enyo, and Pemphredo.2
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the doorway to Perseus. It would 2 Dread, Horror, and Alarm
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the boy into this foolish quest.” “Right here,” Perseus reminded them.
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a wheel, with a series of small roads circling a regular
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she was dispatched to gain the aid of Hephaestus, who willing
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Tartarus, to aid them in rescuing Zeus. These enormous things, possesses
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quickly undid the myriad chains. Released, Zeus made the ringleaders paid
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that once had, the use and maintenance of the same become
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to know about the nature of this ‘symposium.’ “I will be
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quickly, he felt alert and anxious – but in a good
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into the sack. He collected the old bronze sword from Dictys
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surprisingly smooth. The wind was light, but steady and pushed Telephemus
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that was pleasing to look at – whitewashed walls terra cotta
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boats tied up to wood pylons along the length. Perseus held
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“So, lesson one: Do. Not. Look. At. The. Gorgon.” Athena stressed.
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e
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of empty air separated him from the wine dark sea below.
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Hermes shook him sharply. “You have to be in charge. Confidence.
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“Because it amuses me to stir the waters. We are old,
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mostly
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and
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shallow and quiet through his mouth. He stepped slowly and careful,
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with nervous energy in reaction to her presence there. A trivium
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Note: Triumvirate?

Athena, gore-covered, armed, and ready for a fight. Her “birth” had
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if only for the sport of the thing,” she said, “and
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a while, then as the sun was dropping behind the treeshe
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behind the treeshe walked back to check his snares, and rabbit
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one. He quickly killed, gutted, and skinned the animal -- it
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a fire, but by sundown he was warm, and soon after,well-fed.
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and soon after,well-fed. At some point after that, he slept... ...and
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There it was again: dragging, rhythmic. He could hear something else...something
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on his head. He could still see his body and arms...was
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A mass of asps swayed in a halo around her heard,
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The images he had been shown portrayed Stheno3 as powerful-looking, Euryale4
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her head off, he realized, was going to be difficult, to
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the centaur in between him and the monster. He could her
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(he surmised), his basket of goods -- strangely empty -- lifted
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arcing high into the air and showering the temple, him, the
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see a mammoth figure forming out of the ocean -- deep
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sons...you are all that is left of your mother now. Her
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hero, alike, their suffering has also come to an end," Zeus
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while impelled by her transformation, threatened beast and man alike. It
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and the predilections of the creatures caught in the Fates’ web
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daughter back? That you -- her brother and lover -- gave
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I will -- with your permission, of course! - - retire
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to try to figure my path to Hispania at night,” explained
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simplest this way: head straight east and you will arrive as
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Cassiopeia cried, “I have brought this to Tyre? What price? What
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that which you valued above the nereids...” “No!” gasped Cassiopeia. “...you
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Tyre from descriptions of merchants that passed through Serifos -- the
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to follow, her body slithering a circle to in the water,
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fury and pain, the cries -- Perseus could swear -- almost
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the offerings, he first burned a votive to Hermes -- thanking
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speed; it had been little more than murder. Cetus had require
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over the left shoulder and cloak provided, put on his swortbelt
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“Gods, what has happened!” came a cry. Beyond the field standing
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rulers decorating the palace hall, they were understandably upset and concern...who
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think she had a hand in the insult to Nereus’ daughters?”
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Poseidon. Now, thanks to you, noble Cepheus and his beautiful
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idiotic, unnecessarily violent, and despite his sunburned, almost black skin, stunning
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continued, even after Apollo and Hephaestus -- Aphrodite’s husband -- discovered
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will have a war here, on Earth, in those dark place
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own power. My wife, my brother, my children...you will not interfere
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will honor your command concerning her.” “That is all I ask,”Zeus
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after Okeia and her master. Phida, one of the boat captain
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his journeys, my friends! And not a moment too soon!” Polydectes
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besieged the Temple of my father, with my mother inside,” Perseus
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-- my father in affection, if not in blood -- away
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-- away in his house.” Polydectes snarled, “It is true. You
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and waited, turning to watch Perseus. “Wait here a moment,” he
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as a tool by greater forces to... annoy one another. It
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the tally of rulers’ heads Perseus had racked up, but though
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-- men and monsters -- I’ve had my fill of killed,
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of the sailors that an unnamed ship was an unlucky ship...they
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killing Acrisius with a discus, or with a quoit -- the
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dead, although there had been rumors you had survived Acrisius’ attempt
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and the attack by Phineas and his men, and Perseus’ dispatching
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long for this life, Perseus, and I find that -- as
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for those you have wronged here in our city,” -- Perseus
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a wave of applause from the crowd -- Tiryns and Argos,
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to Acrisius’ mind. The young man was strong looking -- sunburned
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highlights...a Phoenician girl, he would bet. All were dressed with in
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family and I arrive much as we left Argos -- with
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strode to meet Perseus, who -- along with Megapenthes -- stepped
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was faster and more flexible, but Megapenthes had the muscle. The
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of Tiryns camped in Larissa, while most of the people or
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often to the seated King Acrisius and his nephew, and the
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A monster slayer and a demigod, he knew that -- eventually
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king. No one noticed the old man and the young body
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to the sea that I had worked since a boy.” You
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sailor from the old days who brought congratulations and a gifts
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followed, another son, and then a daughter that they named Gorgophone5,
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cousin never fully trusted Perseus, but trade between their states because
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his lands, getting to know the 5 “Gorgon Slayer” in Greek.
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on this “hero” Perseus’ army, and his son Argeus -- only
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and arms, a new bronze breastplate with leather skirt -- never
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manically; he had longed to pit himself against this supposed “greatest”
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a warrior taller than any man on the field, staggeringly power
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with red trimming, red horsehair crest over his helmet -- before
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The command was felt, more than heard, and the soldiers felt
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responded. She confirmed, “Not you, no.” “Father!” Electryon cried and felt
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favorite of my children -- we both know this -- but
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puzzle, and Man seemed at the heart of it -- the
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