Tayter_Kat

Super_Bro469

Jun 29th, 2015
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  1. Hello super_Bro469, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to market stalls. Your plot has a very big building, but it is lacking a lot of depth necessary. Depth is the layers within a building. You can add depth to any build by incorporating buttons, fences, slabs, stairs, and trap doors into or onto the structure. This will add make the plot more interesting, and it is necessary for you to rank up to a Novice. One last thing, try using more materials than just wood. This will be more appealing, but don't go to crazy. Make sure your plot has a pallet. Pallet is the blocks chosen/ assigned that fit a theme.
  5. Organics;
  6. This is anything living, like trees and animals. You have trees, but we do not accept bone meal trees. Try making your own. The trunk shouldn't be to skinny nor to huge, and the leaves should be smooth and not boxy.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. You have non of this, so I suggest restarting your whole plot and add terrain first. Make sure the terrain is smooth and flows well instead of choppy and looks like boxes.
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  10. Good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Jr Mod
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