Miscellaneous Fixes 12

Ember.
>The stimulus is starting to make you wet as well, your drooling vagina drooling feminine lubricant  to puddle underneath you
Repetition of "drooling", double space, and no period at the end.

Kelt.
>What you wanted wasn’t to fuck Kelt!... It was for him to fuck you!
Everything after the exclamation mark is bold, which is a little odd but fine. But overall it makes little sense. Did a parser or something fuck up? "What you wanted wasn’t to fuck Kelt... It was for him to fuck you!" with everything after the ellipsis being bolded makes more sense.

Sylvia combat.
>The moth-girl readies selves and dashes back,

Tower of Deception tooltip has the dungeon name as "TowerOfDeception" instead of "Tower of Deception". The button name could be shortened to something like "Deception Tower".

Sophie.
>It was such a good cum...
That's nice.

Stronghold incubus mechanic.
>You even pull them out lick clean,
That's not a sentence.

Sand Witch encounter.
>The orb inside you grows warm, almost hot, suffusing your body with heat and arousal.  (8)
Double space.

Sandtrap.
>It feels like your mouth was made to take and enjoy this creature’s tongue... you begin to kiss the sandtrap back eagerly,
"you" should be capitalized.

>and more like a long barb.  The creature sighs
Double space.

Deepwoods cave discovery.
>While you explore the deepwoods, you do your best to forge into new, unexplored locations.
The mini-map displays when this menu is up. It has an Enter and Leave option, so you're technically not in the cave and shouldn't see the mini-map yet until you use Enter.

Ceraph victory.
>Champion why did you make me despoil your womb? You’re only feeding the swarms of imps that are despoiling this land.
Repetition of "despoil".

Ceraph's Lose to Her option does not raise corruption.

Kiha.
>You can’t lose like that to the Demons. I can’t think of what I’d do if my special Idiot were turned into... one of them.
Uncapitalize "Demons" and "Idiot".

Kiha's Gro+ Tits tooltip has a period too many.

Masturbating in a dungeon.
> Your sex quivers as the pleasure overwhelms you,
Starts with a space.

Incubus mechanic.
>The demonic animal-cunt just continues spurting straight on in
I know he's a cunt, but this shouldn't be. It's supposed to be talking about a dick.

Losing to the deep cave pod while escaping from it by having ridiculous milk production adds the mini-map to the UI prematurely. It should only display after the scene is over.

In the Harpy's victory menu, switch Anal and Pussy around.

Remove "a" from the Anal tooltip in the harpy sex menu, replace "That" with "The" in the Pussy one, and change "tail" to "tails" in the Scissor one. The Lay Eggs tooltip is missing an Oxford comma after "fangs".

Choosing to fuck Mitzi mentions the drider faggot getting away, but the scene dumps you back into the menu to deal with him after you're done fucking her. It acts as if you choose the straight recruit option.

>​You feel no interest in even looking at either of them any longer, so you turn your attention towards Lethice, meeting her gaze directly.
This displays the mini-map when it shouldn't.

>The resounding crunch of a soul being devoured echoes through the grand chamber,
"The resounding crunch of the remnants of a soul being devoured"

>you’d easily mistake it for a princess’s
"princess's"

>Lethice readies selves and dashes back, getting some distance from you!
Good English.

>Lethice dabs at her injury, then licks her finger, smiling sensually. She seems excited and invigorated. Scales appear over her skin, and her spaded tail swishes back and forth in a blur, too fast to follow.
This displays every single turn that passes.

>You feel something slipping off as if by magic. Looking down on the ground, you realize it’s your dragonscale loincloth. Looking down at your lower body, you let out a sigh and pick up your dragonscale loincloth.
Losing the ability to wear underwear results in bad repetition.

Plains bunny egg pregnancy.
>The sky begins to grow brighter as the moon descends over distant mountains, casting a few last ominous shadows before they burn away in the light.
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>Your egg-stuffed womb rumbles oddly, and you have a hunch that something’s about to change.
There are two empty lines between these two.

Lethice fight.
>Swooping low, the Demonic Queen takes a swipe at you with claws that are suddenly six inches long and as sharp as razors! Damn, that hurts! (111)Her sharp claws sunk deep and left lasting wounds; you’re bleeding!
Spacing after the damaging indicator. The "Damn, that hurts!" sounds pretty stupid here.

>You gasp and wince in pain, feeling fresh blood pump from your wounds. (13)
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>Lethice’s wings continue to flap.
One empty line too many.

>Her slender fingers move with all the precision of a master artist’s brush, wreathed in sparks of black energy. (13)You give yourself over to the alien imagery invading your mind,
This is an entire paragraph, and the damage indicator should come after it.

Nephila are definitely bullshit. You can encounter them at level 1 if you go to the mountains and be completely unable to run and they one-shot you as they're level 14. Something needs to be done about this, be it via level-gating or something else.

Taking apart the house in Amily's village.
>You climb up the ladder and grab onto the roof.With the roof now in your reach,
Missing space.

Shouldra.
“My hosts... they rarely... they... ”
Remove the space at the end.

Minotaur.
>slowly building the pressure until suddenly, the flared head pops into you.  Your ass is now a little loose.
Double space and space at the end.

>He licks a milk-coated finger in satisfaction.
Space at the end.

>dulling your senses with narcotic lust. (5)You tumble to your knees a few feet away, compulsively licking it up. Once it’s gone, you rise up, horny and hungry for more.
Spacing on the lust damage indicator. It would also be better to make it appear at the end of the quoted section here.

Stronghold centaur.
one that fit to knot properly.
Missing "is".

>and you switch over to smaller, faster strokes the leave most of the animal-cock inside you.
Change "the" to "to".