NightStrike989 Plot Review

Hello NightStrike989!!

My name is xDraghun and today i'll be reviewing your plot. Lets start off with your structure.

You structure has a weird shape like an upside down, rigged, cone, which is unpleasing to the eye. Your structure is also lacking detail and depth, which are two really essential parts to making a structure.Try implementing stairs and slabs to add detail, and depth is basically pushing in the walls and adding layers of different designs to make the structure look better. If you don't understand what i mean, refer to ./warp depthtutorial. You should also add a variety of different blocks instead of just using stone brick. Make sure the blocks you use match your palette, the choice of blocks u use for your plot that match.

For your organics, you should be ASHAMED, jkjk, but keep in mind that default/bone mealed trees are a no no and forwned upon. At least u made that big custom tree in the corner. Try adding whole into the tree to make it realistic, and maybe you could take the extra step and add apples by getting a steve head from the creative inventory and typing ./skull MHF_Apple. I would like to see more effort with your organics on your plot.

For your terrain, it looks really dull and flat. You pond takes up about half the plot, and is really boring and flat. To add more detail to this, you could change the pond floor to a variety of blocks most commonly sand,birch wood, or sandstone. Maybe add lily pads and sugar cane on the side of the pond to add a more cozy and realistic feel to it. For the actual ground, you should also add a variety of blocks so it isn't so flat such as gravel, cobblestone, dirt, clay, etc. Your hill is pretty decent based on the other things on your plot. For the road, try to make it flow smoother and not so jagged like a triangle.

I have decided to deny your plot based on these conclusions. Just keep in mind what I have said about your plot so you can make major improvements to it. Good Luck and hopefully your have a better chance of ranking with your next plot! :D