Chiyo Kazama;
>Kino theme
>excellent supporter in a team, big force multiplier in battles
>extremely versatile in battle, between the two items, character bind, and some genjutsu thrown in.
>No description of what Talented she took
>Is a wanderer in a world with Bigger Fish
>Probably special-jonin tier, wouldn't do well in straight up fights against dedicated hunter-nin.
4/5 stars, looks fun to writefag

Kurogane Yurai;
>Based samurai
>Perks in line with chadurai
>No description of Sensory Art sadge
>Cool hidden fighting style
>Interesting Curse Mark, fun for plot.
>Not sure how Scorch release interplays with his fighting style. Seems out of place but whatever.
>Custom Bloodline undescribed.
2/5 stars, awaiting more info.

Gozaburo Kinzokuki
>what a name
>2 Talented but no indicator of in what way
>Nice combo of Corrosion, Mud, and Earth Styles
>Golems complement slow Dust style.
>Steel and Dust seem wierd together but whatever.
>Random cursemark? Doesn't add anything feels munchkiny.
>Powerful Jonin with wide array of Jutsu. Would make a decent kage.
3/5

Natsuhada Kiseki
>Another homeless ninja, hope they are strong
>Perfect integration, oh no.
>Paper style + Sealing = king
>Character bind kinda fits the merchant theme I dig it
>Steel + Magnetism, also a cool theme, not such how the two themes interact though?
>This guy has a few seperate themes going on to me, which makes him feel out of place.
>Undeniably strong though, PI evolved alone puts him high up in the bingo book.
2/5, does a too much for my taste.

Vanya Ashwood
>Plothook/10
>Cool theme, all abilities in line with it
>Talented in genjutsu?
>Would like to know more about how the sword utilises Steel Element. Self healing? Changes shape? Shoots blade shards?
>Simple doesn't mean bad.
>Would team up with.
>Easily jonin tier, fits well, jobs to some enemies, crushes others. As it should be.
4/5 would be 5/5 if sword was explained

Bento Hinoto
>No description of what weapon arts he is skilled with
>No details on summoning. presumably cats?
>I assume Custom Technique is a Custome Kekkai Genkai?
>Barren Land Bombardment Style - Bes thing about him, pretty cool.
>Sage Mode? Fits his backstory but then isn't touched on anywhere again.
>Flying Raijin. Competes with Sharigan for level of cringe.
>Seems odd that the  guy who came up with BLBombardment was able to learn how to harmonise with nature to the point he could learn sage mode.
2/5 Is doing a lot, don't see much consistency.

Nuru Nawashi
>Nope/5

Haruka Suzume
>Villain, awesome need some antagonists.
>Dead Soul + Mad Science. I can dig it. Gotta get the mooks from somewhere.
>Steel + Explosion - Damn Steel is popular. Not sure if there is a combination here I am not seeing Explosion seems tacked on.
>Chakra Absorption evolved - this also seems out of place.
>On-hohoho - queen.
>Interesting coherent backstory.
3.5/5

Kali Tename
>Is this the 5th or 6th character called Kali, what the hell is going on
>Nature Chakra, the person.
>Natural Demon, oh good she is insane.
>Upgraded - so abit less insane
>Interesting fighting style
>Unfortunately feels impossible to write for
>Either she turns your to stone or she doesnt
>Either she controls the nature chakra or she turns to stone
>Religious character, thats new
>Elephant Sage - kek
>Would be an absolute threat on the battlefield, but also jobs hard to Genjutsu.
4/5 Took a lot of gimmicky shit but tied it together really well. Still couldn't writefag her.

Kogai Muzen
>Batman the Ninja
>Took Kekkai Genkai but no perk to discount them. Interesting strategy.
>No detail on Hidden Fighting style
>Cool artifact, looks ripped straight form them movie.
>Machina Ex - not sure how I feel about this, but fits with his theme so whatever.
>Chakra sense is minor precog?
>Water Chakra - Based and rainpilled.
Interesting idea.
4/5 simple theme but lives up to it.

Akiri Noboru
>Villain again. Not sure at what point we will be oversaturated but not feeling it yet.
>Feels like if Rock Lee and Neji had a baby and the baby wanted to watch the world burn
>Knock off Strength of 100 Seals + 8 Gates makes him a big threat.
>Vibration+Gentle fist is also a cool concept, but suffers the same sort of writing issue as Kali
>Byakugan feels a little bit off. But fits with the Gentle Fist so whatever.
3.5/5 Fun bad guy, but impossible to write well.

Dagonet
>tf is a Mercenary Churl
>Extremely kino
>Would be a real threat if he can combine Dustless + Weight Control + Hamswurst Style.
>How does he handsign tho?
>Might be abit of a problem to write, if he is going all out. Dustless+weight Style are extremely potent combination
>Has a little bit of everything, I like
>Deep lore with items. Do appreciate
4/5 good fun

Dust Dude
>Sharigan Evolved, oh lord
>Does specify which ability is being boosted by mangekyo?
>Chakra Absorption Evolved, please no.
>Sage Mode, make it stop
>Sage mode without an animal?! ffs.
>Looks suprisingly weak for all the uber abilities that have been loaded into it.
>meme build, complete jobber.
Doesn't even have a name/5

Shinjiro Hayashida
>Whip user - based
>Combined Hearing Boost with Sound Muffled - based
>Water Style - Based
>Eel whip - soulful
>Im starting to feel like some of the coolest stuff in these threads is artifacts or living weapons.
>Gets nagged at by his whip. Makes him look loony. - Based.
5/5 favourite so far, fits well within the setting, fits village theme, interesting character and would be fun to write. Can job to some, jobs on others.

Chisaki Fuma
>Cool fighting style
>Based ranged fighter, not enough of them around
>Not sure how Flying Raijin fits with the weapon, but it doesn't feel cringe so thats a win.
>Typhoon style chadette
>Has extra points from drawbacks, but given unoptimised nature of the character, I don't care.
>Makes Temari look like a chump
4.5/5

Hideki Hyuga
>Did Rock Lee fuck a Hanabi?
>Weapon Art Body Flicker doesnt make much sense. Especially when Nun-Chucks are an option.
>Monkey Bro summongs are cool
>Chakra flow for Sage stuff I guess?
>Gentle Fist on brand, Strong Fist on brand
>Feels sort of wasted but I like it.
>Eight Gates, very strong for a Lee Disciple, who still has the power of youth.
>Sage Mode? Probably one of the few characters it looks good on, still abit cringy but it is what it is.
>Dual nature + Vibration feels extremely out of place. This saddens me a lot Hideki-anon.
3/5 He had me in the first half, but fell apart at the end.