- I don't know how to explain it but it feels like the vocals need to be the same...distance away? from the listener as the instrumental is, because the vocals are a bit too prominent, but the chorusy ahh bits sound super nice


- I would put more reverb on the vocaloid vocals 8D


- this time the vocals sound a bit shy at some points and at other points they are "Alright" with the mix, does he knows about that you can put plugins on the Master track and you should in vocal tracks like for example, in no specific order, EQ, Compressor, Declipper, and Limiter to fix some dynamics without killing your CPU, make things more overall "Full" and "Consistent" with the overall mix and to prevent peaks  (And of course, the limiter is there to prevent everything from exploding if anything gets over the compressor)?

- I think the vocals seem to be sitting on top because the instrumental sounds slightly blurry or muffled.


- The ending (last 30 sec or so) seems a little weak on the vocals to me. >:
The volume balance between the instrumental and the vocals seems fine in some parts, but I agree with what others said that something seems to be lacking...