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- Aspirant Review:
- (yes im in ptime night)
- Great plot so far but theres a couple of things i think you could work on before ranking up :)
- The fortress idea is really cool and i like the detail and depth on it, but i think you could add a few things to it to really step it up :3 Not gonna say what but theres just some things in my head that i think would look cool :D
- The trees need to be smoothed out some and the leaves fluffed up to make them more realistic. The terrain could also use some smoothing to make it less boxy.
- The houses are good but they dont have a lot of depth (layers) to them so really work on that. Also keep to your own style. Theres a plot thats 2 plots awat from yours (owned by OJBtheFox) that im guessing you got them from so please be original. Plot copying can be bannable.
- The river is a nice filler but there needs too be something to get rid of the empty space above it so think of something that you can put there to cut the empty space.
- Good luck with your plot!
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