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- Hey there! :3
- I just want to say this plot has a really unfinished feel to it. There's loads of blank spaces, and it looks like you're in the middle of working on something, with that chunk of land missing from the middle of the plot, I could be wrong. And if I am, please fill the whole plot next time!
- So firstly, terrain. You have a small peaked area in the corner, but apart from that, the rest of the plot is flat. You should raise some areas so it's similar to the corner terrain, or at least have a couple layers around the plot that are built up. You could also add some more block types in so it's not all grass/dirt. Adding things like cliffs shows more diversity to the terrain, and also way more skill. You should also 'decorate' the terrain with grass/flowers/wheat/reeds etc.
- Secondly, organics. The trees you have are okay, but I'd redo the leaf placing. Remembering you have world edit, you could use a sphere brush instead of hand placing! It might make it easier, just remember to have a high air percentage in the brush! It might be easier for you as well if you make some branches on the tree - that way you can follow them with the brush and really 'leaf' the tree well.
- Lastly, structure. The structure you have is really good; you've shown nice detail and depth, however I'd have the roof overhang if I were you; don't keep it on the same level as the walls, otherwise it's hard to distinguish and doesn't look as pretty :3 I think you could also put some more structures around the plot too! Maybe smaller, but in the same style cx
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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