Jewsef

CustomThunder's review

Jun 18th, 2015
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  1. Hey this is Jewsef and I'll be reviewing your plot.
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  3. Alright the plot overall looks alright, but to rank you're going to fix up some stuff.
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  5. For the terrain, you've used way too much w.e. and it's clearly shown. You have to smooth out your terrain using your hand more. I like the cave's idea but I would use different blocks for it, make it more stone-ish and I definitely don't see the reason behind using those diamond ores it's really not appealing.
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  7. For your structure, I do like the way they're formed and the details on them. However you'll have to add more if you wanna rank. If you think you have no space I'd suggest removing your tower and making a bigger one instead.
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  9. For the organics (Trees in your case), The w.e. is so clear on it (again) you have to smooth it out by hand. For the leaves remove them and try doing these two steps.
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  11. -Take any tool out and first type //mask air
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  13. -Then do //br sphere 90%air,10%(id of blocks you want to use.)
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  15. Hope this helps and good luck!
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  17. ~Regards, Jewsef.
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