Hey there! :3

From your other reviews, you haven't really changed too much cx I think you should really change up the plot following what the past reviews said.

I also think that the structure in the Nether area is too close to the Vanilla Nether Fortress. Try and be creative with your builds! Use more of a palette than all Netherbrick, like some 'firey' clay blocks/glass blocks etc. Maybe a tower in design!

Good luck!
- Dutty :3