- Azata's blood magic bonus to saves is untyped instead of status.
- Construct gets Diplomacy? And not Crafting? Seems odd, especially with its Blood Magic.
- Dark Tapestry greater focus spell has a different name
- I would change Runic Weapon/Runic Armor names just to avoid confusion with the Remaster spells.
- Repostioning spell is weird. Either it shouldn't be a Metamagic/Spellshape feat, because it doesn't modify the spell itself, or it should be written differently (because Metamagic should take effect only if your next action is a spell). If you want it to remain Metamagic, it should be something like, "If your next action is to cast a spell, you can take a Step and Stride before or after the action in any order".
- See Desire should have a Detection trait, like Mind Read.
- Assured Repositioning calls Repositioning Spell "repositioning step"
- Legion of the Blood Blessed should affect "the chosen creatures" instead of "all creatures that were within 15 feet of you - when you used this feat", and also shouldn't have the Metamagic trait.
- Stone-Cold Glare should have the Fear and Mental traits.
- Warp Flesh and Snake-Braids should have the Morph trait.
- Camouflage should have Polymorph trait.
- Mutant Might should have the Polymorph trait. Also, the Spitter and Enflamed forms should specify that the persistent damage is Acid/Fire.
- Freedom's Alacrity should write "each use their Reaction" instead of Reactions, in case your allies have more than one Reaction (super super specific).
- Hypercognitive Assessment should have the Prediction trait.
- Glade of Obfuscation should have the Extradimensional trait.

Editorial nitpicks:
- It's really small, but I do think that Bloodline Skills/Traits should go in alphabetical order.
- The bolding is off in the spells: Divine Protection, Braiding Snakes, Mutagenic Might.
- Enveil and Divine Splendor traits got combined.